Thursday, 9 March 2017

A Conjuring of Light

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Book Title: A Conjuring of Light
Author: V.E. Schwab
Series: Shades of Magic #3
Date Started: February 21st 2017
Date Completed: March 9th 2017
Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Romance
Quality Rating: Five Stars
Enjoyment Rating: Four Star
Final Rating: Four stars
Review:

A Conjuring of Light was a great conclusion to a beautifully visionary series. However, while for me the book didn't do anything wrong, it didn't do anything mindblowing either. Regardless, this is a series that I could pick up whenever I felt like it and become oblivious to everything happening around me while I read it.

This whole series is so imaginative when it comes to worldbuilding and magic systems. I mean, the premise of the final book is that they're fighting magic itself. Every city, every kingdom, every commoner, outlaw and royal are lovingly stitched into this vast tapestry with such care that everything feels real. And if that wasn't enough we're given a character who can actually see the threads of magic binding people and things together. I'm a sucker for imagery at the best of times, but Vic takes it to the next level.
Sex scenes seem to be something cropping up more in books these days. Maybe I'm just reading different books, but I think the freedom of sexuality that's emerging is extending to younger forms of literature as well - which is really good if it's used properly. What Vic did with it in this book was the best example I've come across, because it was there naturally, instead of being put in there for the sake of having a sex scene. (Spoilers ahead if you don't want to know who it's with, though if you've read the other books it's obvious.) What we end up having here is a scene of intimacy, that happens to involve sex as a form of expressing that. It's not there to be a little indulgent sex scene for the hell of. Kell and Lila fall into the situation naturally and spontaneously, and it feels like it's there for them to, not the reader, and so it feels so much more significant as a result.

I had a bit of a jerky start to Conjuring since we begin immediately where the last book left off, and after a year of reading other books in between, I spent a lot of the opening chapters being reminded of what had happened as opposed to being caught up in the atmosphere and drama. Having said that, Vic definitely took that into consideration and makes sure there are enough references dotted along the way to catch us up, and also leave a bit of build up time before the main story starts to begin.
Although, the pacing did take me a bit of time to get into; going straight in meant that there wasn't really any build up to the tension, so a lot of it was lost on me. I still enjoyed the first part of the book, but I felt like I missed out on a lot of it too. Things get real almost instantly and then stay there for pretty much the whole book, so I was a bit jumbled when it came to feeling the excitement or fear of the characters because I was still a few steps behind in getting myself to the same emotional place as them. I think it also caught me off guard because there isn't as much playfulness in Conjuring as the rest of the series. I liked the constant threat of this book but I'd also be lying if I said I didn't miss more of a balance with the original humour.
But what made Conjuring a brilliant conclusion to the Shades of Magic series was the way in which it took every element of the previous books and incorporated it with the new storyline. It really felt like we were drawing to a close with nostalgia weaved almost imperceptibly into the plot, but there were still enough new things to keep us busy. And actually even now, with the book over, there's a sense that there's enough open for the characters to keep going. So much of this book - and the series as a whole - is about following these characters as they grow and start to take on new responsibilities. It's not a coming of age book, but I can look back and see that every one of them has crossed a threshold into a new place, and there's still so much ahead of them that we don't have to see to know is there. I adored this so much because it sent me back to being a kid again, and reading books and making up stories for all the characters after the book ended. Without needing to be shown it, when the book and the series ended the story didn't immediately finish like so many of them often do: I genuinely feel like they're still continuing to exist somewhere off the page.

When it comes down to it, I think we all agree that the characters are the thing that puts this book ahead of the others. I think that was proven once again by a number of times I actually had to stop reading in this book and just sit in awe of Lila for a moment, and verbally say how much I loved her several times over. I write a lot myself, and many of my female characters have echoes of people like Lila, but I could only dream of nailing her so perfectly. She's such a balanced character who's fighting constantly for herself, with herself, for others, with others. She shows a lot of vulnerability willingly and unwillingly, even in tiny little gestures that I'm sure a lot of people don't even notice. Lila's intelligent, scared, kickass and powerful, all from her own choices, but she can let other people in as well. Writing such a well-rounded character that isn't just passive and trying to tick every box, but actually has a personality is a talent that I think Vic should be internationally recognised for because it brings everything she writes to life. And especially at a time like this when there's so much contention towards diversity. In fact, there are so many diverse characters scattered throughout the whole universe Vic's created: there are women in positions of power left, right and centre, we have people of colour taking up a wonderful amount of lead roles, the most influential couple in the series are homosexual, all without batting an eyelid.
Which of course leads me on to the rest of the cast. I could talk about every single character in these books for days but I've decided to give Lila the limelight she deserves, and sum up the rest of these people together. What really makes this series are the characters that burrow their way into your heart. Each is their own defined character, they all have their own negative complexes that most certainly brush against each other's sometimes; Kell's got his saintly complex, Rhy his fear of being used, Alucard doubtful belonging and provoking humour, Holland his hopeless wanting. But they all have their saving graces too. They're all heroes in their own way, and I love the fact that none of them can really get where they want to without letting each other in.

I follow Vic's work almost religiously at this point and everything she comes up with I can't wait to get my hands. The Shades of Magic series was probably the first one that properly got me into her writing and while I hate to see it finished, I'm content with the way it drew to a close.

Sunday, 19 February 2017

The Final Empire

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Book Title: The Final Empire
Author: Brandon Sanderson
Series: Mistborn #1
Date Started: February 4th 2017
Date Completed: February 19th 2017
Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Action
Quality Rating: Five Stars
Enjoyment Rating: Five Star
Final Rating: Five stars
Review:

As usual, I don't know why I took so long to get around to this book. The Final Empire is exactly the kind of thing that I love: traditional high fantasy with a couple of awesome protagonists in a mentor/student relationship and a loveable cast of side characters, but with original and modern twists. Within the first couple of pages I knew it would be a favourite, but after finishing it I don't really know what I did with my life before I read it.

The make or break moment for most high fantasy books is the reveal of worldbuilding - sometimes it can be pinned down to a single moment, at best it's sprinkled the whole way through the book for you to absorb gradually. Sanderson did both. We're given a lot of information at the start to establish our idea of the what's going on, but we have this lovely slow and intuitive worldbuilding throughout the story that pulls on all these little ties and expectations we already have with high fantasy. On its own, it's arguably a rather standard fantasy world, but what makes The Final Empire different is the use of magic. The magic system in this book is so original and interesting the second it started being explored it was onto a winner. The idea revolves around different metals being able to grant Allomancers different powers, but Sanderson ties the politics in so closely that the magic system doesn't feel like deus ex machina as we're so often used to in books that contain magic. It's an integral part of this world and how its society works, as well as being exciting.

I was very happy for The Final Empire to catch me off guard as it so often did. I love reading diversely, and I love reading a whole manner of genres, levels and styles, but it's been a while since I've had something that was just right for me that I could sink my teeth into. Sanderson reminded me why I love high fantasy so much, and how good it is to be truly surprised when you can't predict the direction of a story.
This story takes place over a big time frame in which a lot of things happen. It's dealt with masterfully, so there's a clear passing of time, but it doesn't lose the sense of scale as a result. The things that happen in this book are big. We all love those rebellion narratives that are supposedly changing the world, but they often fail to feel as big and important as they're made out to be. The Final Empire - both the book and the empire itself - felt so solid in its worldbuilding right from the off that I could feel the political and social tensions immediately. By the time the big events started to happen I was entirely sold on it.

Much to my satisfaction, The Final Empire had a wonderful, varied and loveable cast of characters. There was depth to everyone, and even the evil characters I found myself admiring, but of course, it was our protagonists Kell and Vin that stole the show.
For a protagonist who I was reasonably flippant about to start with, Vin gave me so much pride. She grows an incredible amount throughout the book and I really admired the way she began as scared, timid and used to being used, and grew into a brave, independent, inquisitive woman. We so often see protagonists who start off reckless or stubborn and become well grounded, but it's a harder to find the development starting from a place of true fear. We're introduced to Vin when she is in a constant place of fear, so to see her place in the narrative develop into the hero that she grows to be really got to me. Towards the end, I was close to tears for pride, and the final words given to her in faith of her abilities really got to me.
And if we're going down the traditional fantasy route, you've got to have the sassy troublemaker and the wise mentor. With Kell we get both in one. He's so easy to love and easy to hate, his personality had me rooting for him straight away. He was a brilliant match for Vin, not only to balance out her initial uncertainness but to pick up her spirits and courage later on as well. And while a lot of exposition around a character is usually a negative point for me, Kell's history got me right in the heart and added so much to his character that I can't speak ill of it.

Brandon Sanderson isn't the father of modern fantasy for nothing. The Final Empire stands wonderfully on its own, but is clearly part of a huge world and story. It had me literally cursing and gasping out loud, clenching my fists and nearly turned me into Bradley Cooper from Silver Linings Playbook towards the end. It's 100% a new favourite of mine, and I desperately want to get my hands on the next books as soon as possible.

Saturday, 4 February 2017

The Book of Bera

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Book Title: The Book of Bera
Author: Suzie Wilde
Date Started: January 23rd 2017
Date Completed: February 4th 2017
Genres: Historical, Fantasy, Adventure
Quality Rating: Three Stars
Enjoyment Rating: Two Star
Final Rating: Three stars
Review:

◆ Thanks to Unbound for this proof copy for review ◆

A fantasy adventure following a Viking protagonist was an intriguing prospect filled with a lot of potential. Which, as so many books end up being, wasn't used as well as it could have been. The downfall for The Book of Bera for me was that it was trying to be something it wasn't, and missed its mark as a result. Unfortunately, I didn't reach the end of this book, but I reached my 100-page limit for giving books a try.

I'm quite frustrated with this book in general because it could've been so good and enjoyable had the story been allowed to play out naturally. It is, by nature, quite an exciting adventure story, and Wilde's endearing writing makes it feel childish - and childish should in no way be a criticism as long as it's used properly. The problem that I found was that Wilde was determined to push darker issues to make a point about the tone she wanted, but that tone didn't fit the story I was reading. Had I not come across a rape scene (which I wasn't completely happy with, let alone with of the lack of sensitivity on it involving a child) I would've been happy calling this a kids book whether it was aimed at young adults or not. I think it's a bit of a shame because addressing those issues doesn't really have any wider significance, and meant that Wilde couldn't follow what I felt was the naturally adventurous side of the story.
Following on from that, I so desperately wanted the fantasy element to be pushed more. Is it fantasy? Is it magical realism? It wasn't particularly clear because it wasn't at the forefront of the narrative, which I personally think it should have been. We get a lot of daily Viking activities but I wanted to know about the folklore and traditions as well - but the extent of that was pretty much the skerns talking to Bera. Which was great, if a little sparse through the story. Wilde seemed to focus on other things and didn't let the part of the book that felt more unique pay off.

The Book of Bera throws you into the story pretty quickly, and things escalate almost immediately. Almost too fast since events don't feel like they flow into one another - they more follow one another in unrelated bursts and poor Bera is battered around in the meantime. While I felt some sympathy for our protagonist (when she wasn't annoying me) I got very frustrated at the book expecting me to get emotional over characters and things that have been given no development. One of the keys events that kicks off this book is the death of someone close to Bera, but it happens with so little build up - of both tension and character development - that when I was expected to mourn I just sort of shook my head. This happened a couple of times in the amount I read of this book and it started to get on my nerves that the story was depending on your emotional reactions to things that had no emotional effort behind them.
What interested me about this book was the opportunity to learn about Viking culture and see that utilised in a story. I've never read anything like that before and I think the reason why a lot of people are looking at it is because of that very point. The folklore element, as I've already discussed, feels like it's glossed over, but the everyday culture itself is an integral part of the story. Which is wonderful - if I knew what all these words and references meant. As a reader, I felt thrown into the deep end of the world without any explanation or background. I didn't felt like I was given a chance to understand the verbiage before it was being used as a big part of the story, so I started missing key points pretty quickly. This is probably a big reason as to why I couldn't follow this book through to the end and is a real shame because it was what I was so intrigued by that ended up losing me.

There aren't a great deal of characters we're encouraged to attach to in this book (apart from the ones we know for two seconds), so ultimately our whole engagement with the story lies heavily on Bera's shoulders. This could've been great in getting across that idea of loneliness but power in independence. Could've been. Now I can't claim to know what Bera is like at the end of the book, but from what I read she played a very passive part in the story. I appreciate that she's a child and doesn't understand a lot of the horrible things that are happening a lot of the time but a) it isn't the most engaging perspective to read from and b) it doesn't mean the bad things that do happen can just be dismissed because she can't understand them. Now, to be fair, I've read far worst protagonists, but it just drew me back to the idea that Wilde was trying to push in a direction the story didn't want to go in, to the point where it was disjointed.

There's nothing wrong with a fun fantasy adventure exploring a culture, but The Book of Bera felt like it was trying too hard to push itself into a tone it wasn't meant for. Writing this for children and exaggerating the magic and adventure could've made it a very good book, but for me the off-tone story that didn't properly delve into the Viking culture led by a passive character didn't retain my interest.

Monday, 23 January 2017

The Foxhole Court



Book Title: The Foxhole Court
Author: Nora Sakavic
Series: All for the Game #1
Date Started: January 5th 2017
Date Completed: January 23rd 2017
Genres: Contemporary, Thriller
Quality Rating: Four Stars
Enjoyment Rating: Four Star
Final Rating: Four stars
Review:

What drew me to The Foxhole Court was not its premise - I'll be honest, the whole American college experience doesn't interest me in the slightest - but the hype promising that this book was far more than meets the eye. It's somewhat underground cult status intrigued me and from a few positive reactions from people I trust I thought I might as well give it a try for 99p. Best 99p I've maybe ever spent.

I don't feel like I can really give this book more than four stars because it definitely has its weaknesses, but I'm calling it now that this trilogy is going to be five stars by the end of it. The main thing that was stopping me this time - and I'm sure is the reason these books are self-published - is that it's mainly told through information dumping. Strangely enough, I didn't actually mind once I got the swing of it because everything else is so well done, and Sakavic is building such a complex and solid world with it. But it has to be said that until the end we're being told extensive exposition in big chunks in order to appreciate the gravity of the rest of the book - which we do, but it's not structured in the best way it could be. But damn, it's still so good, and the heart of this book far outweighs its weaknesses.

The Foxhole Court is, essentially, about a team of violently troubled misfits that are as much at odds with each other as they are with the outside world. Looking back, there aren't many happy times in this book, it's all conflict. But there's a sort of community in that conflict between the teammates, even if things get out of hand, and that's the whole point of this story. Their distrust of each other is, honestly, completely valid, but they know when there are bigger threats to them on the outside of their group that trumps their dislike for each other.
Speaking of which, what really impressed me was the balance between the typical high school/college sport contemporary and a very dark gangster culture, without it feeling silly. It's a hard balance to pull off because it can so easily fall into the trap of melodrama and pushes the boundaries of what your readers can take seriously. Sakavic dedicates enough time into her world building and character development that we feel the gravity of these two worlds pressing onto our protagonists. I'm still not entirely sold on the sporting sequences (I have no idea what half the drills they put Neil through are), but I was invested enough in the people to find plenty to engage with.

Unanimously, I think it's agreed that the shining strength of these books are the characters. Gangs of misfits have always been my chosen protagonists, and Sakavic did not disappoint; in fact she insisted on going one up and providing arguably twelve protagonists which, amazingly, I was able to keep up with. And they were each good characters too. Varied, developed characters that clearly had their own backstories laid out in Sakavic's head even if they weren't written on the page. Even the arseholes of the group were well developed and believable.
Watching their interactions with each other was what drove me through this book, especially with the adults. Yes, I felt the tension between Neil and Kevin, and I wanted to punch Andrew as much as Matt did, but seeing the respect and true aggression between the team and Coach Wymack was so interesting for me, and I think most telling about all of them. Aside from the fact I love Abby and Wymack the most, they were so powerful in the story even if not directly involved. Adults can often be overlooked in Young Adult fiction, so seeing their inclusion was refreshing, and the power dynamic added yet more weight to what was happening. 

Despite the contemporary genre not being my thing Sakavic's merging with the crime thriller (even if very sparingly) pulled me into this book, but it was the characters that wouldn't let me back out again. I've been walking around today after finishing the book thinking about them and where this story has to go. It has its weaknesses, but it's a debut and I've read far, far worse books from big publishers, so I'm happy to see The Foxhole Court getting the cult status it deserves.

Wednesday, 4 January 2017

Playing with Fire



Book Title: Playing with Fire
Author: Derek Landy
Series: Skulduggery Pleasant #2
Date Started: December 29th 2016
Date Completed: December 31st 2016
Genres: Fantasy, Adventure, Mystery, Thriller, Action
Quality Rating: Four Stars
Enjoyment Rating: Five Star
Final Rating: Five stars
Review:

I wasn't feeling up for starting a whole new book in the few days before the end of the year, so instead I snuck in a reread of another Skulduggery book. Playing with Fire was my absolute favourite book when I was younger - probably until Death Bringer came out - and like with the first book, I was a bit apprehensive as to whether to would stand up to what I remembered it as. And, again, I needn't have worried. It's funny looking back so early in the series though, because as much as I love it, the game hasn't even begun yet. Playing with Fire is pretty much the definition of 'the good old days'.

I'm starting to understand why - past the sheer awesomeness - I love these books so much. The brilliant female characters and politics definitely have something to do with it, not to mention the action scenes and magic system. But for me personally, what I noticed while rereading Playing with Fire was how these stories run like a film. There's this perfect, succinct imagery that presents what's happening so exactly in your head that you can anticipate and feel the tone with just a few words. And Derek does it without having to fuel it all with cliches - I'm reading these events run off like the most smoothly edited and staged scene in a film and it's utterly brilliant. Derek has a history in screenwriting, and it definitely comes through. But for me as a film student hoping to be a director, how could I not love a something that gives me a crystal clear film in my head?

Oh, this series. Oh the action, oh the plot, oh the one-liners, oh the characters, oh everything. Oh, Derek. Stop it. This guy can spin off a story about a teenage girl and a skeleton detective solving crimes and make it about so much more. He can have a rich magical world and let us focus on the excitement and wonder of it, but have a complex political power play going on in the background. He can give you characters that are diverse and varied, and ones that are utterly evil, but you love them because they feel so real. He can make each book its own story, enjoyable in its own right, and weave it into a much bigger arc without losing the integrity of each individual novel. If we're talking specifically about Playing with Fire he can write several little crime stories in one, a few dozen awesome action scenes, countless points of character development, and make it into a story about saving the world that you haven't seen before. Yes, I am completely biased in everything I say about this series, but I'm biased because it's persuaded me to love it so much.
You can tell Derek's a schemer when you go back and read the early books. There are little hints to what happens later in the story scattered literally everywhere, and it's a shame it's not really something you can appreciate on your first read when you have no idea where things lead. But catching the foreshadowing and ironic little turns (intentional or not) makes rereading it so much more engaging, even when you know what's happening like the back of your hand. I don't often reread books in general - oo many books, so little time and all - but I don't even hesitate with Derek, because I know I'll have just as much fun as the first time, and probably find new stuff that I never noticed before while I'm at it.

Seeing all the characters at this early point in the story makes me respect them even more. The development from now to the end of the series is staggering, but we still start with solid characters at the beginning. Something I've been thinking about with this series is the way in which it portrays different kinds of intelligence and how that really isn't something you see that much. You tend to get stories that have the 'book smart' person but that ends up being pretty much the only form of intelligence around. In Skulduggery, there are definitely people who are book smart, but Bliss has strategic intelligence, Tanith is people smart, Valkyrie learns on her feet so fast, and Skulduggery... let's not fuel his ego.
Valkyrie, especially, is such a brilliant character, and for more than seeing a female protagonist with intelligence and physical strength. While I hesitate to call this a children's series (especially towards the end), I did read these books when I was a lot younger, and while rereading Playing with Fire it struck me who grateful I am for a character like Val. Because Valkyrie is uncertain and scared in this book. She's the protagonist, she's brave at times, and she's kick ass and awesome. But she's a thirteen year old kid who doesn't know entirely what she's doing; she hasn't mastered her magic yet and she's being put into a lot of really dangerous situations in which she's always surrounded by adults. She gets hurt, and she gets scared in a realistic way that you would in those situations. But she carries on anyway and deals with the fallout as she goes. I respect Derek so much for taking his time to build her up as a person over this huge series because it's so valuable for such a young protagonist to honestly be scared and inexperienced in a story, but improve as they grow up. Like myself, a lot of kids have and do read this series, and I don't think I've seen a character grow and develop and become stronger just through growing up like I have with Valkyrie, and that's such a great thing to show younger people.

While I can't say it's my favourite book in the series anymore, rereading Playing with Fire properly (I'm skim read all of the books about twenty times each) was almost a different experience to when it first came out. It really reminds you how far everyone has come and how dark things really get. But, at the same time, this book isn't trivial. Yeah, it's not the gritty, edgy finale that we end up at, but it's still complex and clever and awesome. This series has something in it for everyone, and even now I'm finding new aspects I hadn't noticed before. Reading Skulduggery Pleasant feels like coming home.

Saturday, 31 December 2016

TheDaisyDeer's Best Books of 2016


2016 has been an interesting year for me in reading. When I look back on the year it's a bit disappointing that there aren't any stand-out books for me (if you've been around for a while you might notice that I don't have a 'best overall novel' this year).
But at the same time when I go back to my blog or GoodReads and see everything together, it appears that actually that I've had a very good reading year: I read more books this year than last, I read a wider variety and began looking at things like poetry and graphic novels, I had my first full year working with NetGalley and became a reviewer for Unbound Publishers as well.
And there have definitely been stories I have fallen in love with too. Quite uncharacteristically of me, I've shed a few emotional tears over books in 2016, and I've nearly thrown my kindle across the room in frustration at how stupid some novels are.
Overall, though there might not be one particular book that I instantly remember as being the best thing I read in 2016, there are a whole host of novels that I loved and are more than worthy to be gracing bookshelves everywhere. Here are the best books that I read (but were not necessarily released) in 2016:

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Novel with the Best Story read in 2016:
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Empire of Storms
Sarah J. Maas

Novel with the Best Writing read in 2016:
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A Monster Calls
Patrick Ness

Novel with the Best Entertainment read in 2016:
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This Savage Song
V.E. Schwab

Best New Discovery read in 2016:
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The Penelopiad
Margaret Atwood

Best Fantasy Novel read in 2016:
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A Gathering of Shadows
V.E. Schwab

Best Sci-Fi Novel read in 2016:
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Sleeping Giants
Sylvain Neuvel

Best Dystopian Novel read in 2016:
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Wolf by Wolf
Ryan Graudin

Best Historical Novel read in 2016:
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Salt to the Sea
Ruta Sepetys

Best Contemporary Novel read in 2016:
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The Dreamers
Gilbert Adair

Best Romantic Novel read in 2016:
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The Winner's Kiss
Marie Rutkoski

Best Classic Novel read in 2016:
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The Burial at Thebes (Antigone)
Sophocles, translated by Seamus Heaney

Best Mystery/Thriller Novel read in 2016:
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Crooked Kingdom
Leigh Bardugo

Best Graphic Novel read in 2016:
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Persepolis
Marjane Satrapi
Read my summary of Persepolis here!

Best Poetry Collection read in 2016:
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Give Me a God I Can Relate To
Blythe Baird

Best Review Copy [not otherwise mentioned] read in 2016:
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Falling Awake
provided by NetGalley & Vintage
Alice Oswald


Image Sources:
Empire of Storms - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/29559052-empire-of-storms
A Monster Calls - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17262384-a-monster-calls
This Savage Song - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/28696452-this-savage-song
The Penelopiad - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/561371.The_Penelopiad
A Gathering of Shadows - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/26236443-a-gathering-of-shadows
Sleeping Giants - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/28587880-sleeping-giants
Wolf by Wolf- https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/27433569-wolf-by-wolf
Salt to the Sea - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/28930418-salt-to-the-sea
The Dreamers - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/624641.The_Dreamers
The Winner's Kiss - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/28587801-the-winner-s-kiss
The Burial at Thebes - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/839731.The_Burial_at_Thebes
Crooked Kingdom - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/28933383-crooked-kingdom
Persepolis - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/3106983-persepolis
Give Me a God I Can Relate To - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/27803255-give-me-a-god-i-can-relate-to
Peter and Alice - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/17347724-peter-and-alice
Falling Awake - https://www.goodreads.com/book/show/30840109-falling-awake

Friday, 30 December 2016

Crystal Storm

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Book Title: Crystal Storm
Author: Morgan Rhodes
Series: Falling Kingdoms #5
Date Started: December 26th 2016
Date Completed: December 15th 2016
Genres: Fantasy, Romance, Adventure
Quality Rating: Three Stars
Enjoyment Rating: Four Star
Final Rating: Three stars
Review:

As the fifth instalment of the Falling Kingdoms series, things are started to pull together. The characters are gravitating towards each other and everyone's endgames are starting to be revealed. But while Crystal Storm jumped the story forward, for me it stumbled back in terms of character development and relationships.

This book was quite predictable, but then again I've never read the Falling Kingdoms series for its plotline, I've always been much more interested in its characters. But it'd be nice to have a few little twists here and there like the previous books. In fact a lot of what didn't work for me in Crystal Storm is to do with the standards the series has set itself so far, so I can't be too harsh; Gathering Shadows and Frozen Tides especially were always going to be a tough act to follow. But where the rest of the series has felt well done with a few little errors slipping through, Crystal Storm felt like there was a huge rush to get the book done so a lot of things were left to slide in. There's an awful lot of telling instead of showing in this book, and when there's so many characters we know so well to interact with one another this really shouldn't be the case, especially when Rhodes has be able to imply things without directly telling us before.
Another little thing I want to mention was the way that abuse was dealt with. On the surface, there's a great, strong picture given about how wrong it is. But saying 'I'd never let anyone raise a hand to me, I'm too strong' and leaving it at that doesn't give a good representation of how other people's actions supposedly dictate your strength or weakness. How other people act say things about them, not you. I'm very sure this wasn't the message that was intended, but it troubles me that it only half dealt with the issue. I find this a bit in the feminist side of the story as well: everyone's very quick to say that the women are as strong as men, but are also very quick to insult men for being men, and are then happy submit to masculinity. As a whole, these aren't huge, glaring problems because it the vast scheme of things it works in the story and supports the characters and their values, but it's still a little detail that I think gets out of hand in a lot of fiction quickly if its not addressed.

What frustrated me the most about this book was that there's so many stupid pieces of dialogue, or silly predictable plot twists, or even tiny little actions that are so cliched and out of place just for the sake of having a 'funny' response or a forced interaction between characters. Don't get me wrong, these little things definitely happened in the previous books but they weren't every other page. In Crystal Storm it felt like Rhodes was doing whatever felt the most dramatic regardless of the continuity she'd painstakingly built up over the series. She sacrifices her own story for sounds cool and I just think it's a shame. In this book especially, the instances of this became much bigger plot holes and empty logic just to get into tense situations or play with our heart strings. But unfortunately it brought me so out of the story I wasn't getting that emotional response anymore.
While everyone's paths have crossed, and we're building up to the ending from here on out, Crystal Storm honestly felt... stagnant. Though the story did progress, we didn't actually move that far over the whole book - you can count the locations on one hand - and events didn't have the weight to it like in the previous books. In all fairness, some things had to be cleared up before we get into the final chapters of the series, but perhaps it was a bad, bad idea to bring everyone together so soon then. When I saw everyone ending up in the same place, I immediately thought that this is it, things are really going to speed up now. Instead, I'm still waiting for that final catalyst to go off as everything goes to hell.

I've mentioned that I felt Crystal Storm took a stumble backwards in terms of characters for this book; the most obvious example of this being that I don't think the characters were really themselves. I sympathise with Rhodes at having to write so many characters that we've grown to know so well in the same place at the same time (again, was that sensible?), but in favour or creating some honestly unnecessary dramatic tension we have characters acting like people they're not. And the consequence of this was that they're losing their lovability; I'm finding it harder and harder to look at them as real people. In fact, in the few days it's taken me to get to writing this review I completely forgot that we lost some people in this book. That's not a good sign.
This series follows multiple narratives, but it's a lie to say that it's not the Cleo and Magnus show. Unusually, this is something that's developed as the readers have made clear their preferences and it's really nice to see that Rhodes is giving us more of them as a result. I, personally, love both Cleo and Magnus - on their own and together. However, some of their relationship dramas in this book were just for the hell of it, let's be honest. (Slight spoilers: there's no reason to 'curse' Cleo past the sexual tension; there's no logic behind them keeping their relationship a secret; there's no point in suggesting a love triangle with Jonas other than to have the angsty arguments). I have no problems with romance being included - hell, Cleo and Magnus is a couple that I definitely indulge in - but because I like them as characters so much I want it to feel genuine, not cliche tension to tease your readers.

Crystal Storm was a genuinely enjoyable read but it's not the standard I expect from Rhodes these days. A long series where hype grows is a hard thing to keep up and I commend her for where the books are going, but this particular instalment was a bit of a let down when so much of it was powered with cliches that we know Rhodes has the ability to avoid.

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